OET Writing (Dietetics)

                                 OET Writing (Dietetics)


Dr Susan Green

The Doctor

Stillwater Medical Clinic

Date: 15 May 2021

Dear Dr Green


Re: Mr  Emilia Samson

DOB : 18 November 1956

I am writing to update you the status of Mr Samson,  who requires dietary advice and management. He is diagnosed with hypercholesterolaemia and angina.

On 08 May 2021, Mr Samson presented with the complaints of the symptoms.  His BMI (31.7) indicated obesity, and his blood test reports showed risk of heart disease.

Regarding his dietary habits, Mr Samson consumes high-fat and high-glycemic index carbohydrates. He eats fast foods daily at lunch, and takes chocolates, crips and soft drinks as snacks. On top of that, the  dietary recall reveals his excessive consumption of high energy food tuff.

Mr Samson was advised to reduce his intake of high saturated fays, and replace it with refined carbohydrates, along with fruits, vegetables,  and oily fish. 

On review  today, Mr Samson has lost one kilo of body weight , and a centimeter of waist circumference. Although he has reduced his carbohydrate intake, he finds it difficult to avoid pasta, and bread. However, he has started  waking after dinner twice a week.

Mr Samson has a strong history of cardiovascular diseases.

In view of the above, Mr Samson is being referred to you.

Should you have any queries, do not hesitate to contact me.


Yours sincerely


Dietitian  


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