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  OET Writing, The Connectors to be  Avoided. In OET writing, it is important to use connectors that are appropriate for the professional tone of a healthcare letter. Avoid using the following connectors : 1. Academic Connectors : These are typically used in academic writing and may not be suitable for the professional tone of OET writing. Example: Furthermore, Moreover . 2. Informal Connectors : These are typically used in informal or conversational English and may not be suitable for the professional tone of OET writing.  Example: Besides, Meanwhile, So, Hence, Thus. 3. Simple Connectors: at the Beginning of a Sentence:  Some simple connectors such as 'and' , 'but' and 'also' are fine to include in the middle of a sentence, but avoid using them for the start of the sentence. Use more formal alternatives such as 'Additionally' , "Therefore" , and "However' .  ------------- The End---------------

                 OET Writing - Check List for all Profession Criterion 1 : Purpose (0-3)                        Examiner Focus:       Is the reason for writing clear in the first sentence and consistent throughout?   Self-Check Questions:  * Did I state the purpose in the opening line? * Is the purpose maintained until the end? ....................................................................................................... Criterion   2 :   Content (0- 7)                      Examiner Focus:   *  Are the case note details accurate, relevant for continuity of care? Self-check Question:  (i)   Did I include what the recipient needs? (ii) Did I avoid irrelevant history or repetition? ..................................................................................

  Dr Bruce Russell The General Practitioner Health First Clinic 123 High Street, Newtown Date: 14 March 2019 Dear Dr Russell Re: Mr Tim Langham DOB: 01 August 1995 Thank you for referring Mr Langham, who requires dietary advice. He has been diagnosed with anaemia.   Today, Mr Langham presented with the complaints of mild depression and lethargy. Although he has experienced recent weight loss, his BMI remains within the normal limits (20.4).  The biochemical data shows that hemoglobin is below the normal range, and he is on B12 injection on every 3-6 months.  Regarding his dietary information, Mr Langham consumes an excessive amount of carbohydrates, and fats. His dietary pattern shows a reduction in the absorption of iron from the foods; therefore, consumption of dairy products is to be reduced.  During the discussion, Mr Langham was counselled to increase the vegetarian sources of iron, such as legumes, leafy vegetables, dried apricots figs, nuts, vitamin- food...

    OET Reading Part C - Reference Questions Question 1: What does "this" refers to in the paragraph? A.  60-70 % of the Asian population B. 150 minutes of moderate intensity exercise per week. C. Physical activity D. Levels of activity. A lack of physical activity has been identified as the fourth leading factor for global mortality, and the principal cause of approximately 30% of the coronary heart disease burden. Physical activity is defined as not meeting the minimum guidelines of at least 150 minutes of moderate intensity exercise per week. This characterizes between 60-70% of the Australian population. However, levels of activity appear to be growing.  Regular, moderate to vigorous activity is being widely promoted as a measure for preventing and managing CHD. It is important to note that a lack of physical activity is not the same as being sedentary. Question 2. What does the word "they" refer to in the passage? A. Syndromes B. Questions C. Studies D. Origin...

                                         OET Writing: Hyphenated Words Precise and appropriate vocabulary usage is crucial in OET writing. Pay attention to hyphenated terms, especially when describing medical conditions, treatments, and patient care.  1. Hyphenated Compounds: A series of two or more words joined by hyphens is called a Hyphenated Compound. In medical writing, you will come across various hyphenated terms. Here are some common examples: * Post-operative: Referring to the period after surgery. * Well-being: Describing a state of health and happiness. * Patient-centered: Focusing on the patient's need. * Health-related: Pertaining to matters related to health. * Non-invasive: Not involving surgical procedures. * Self-management: The ability of patients to manage their own health. * Evidence-based: Grounded in scientific research and evidence. * Pre-existing: Existin...

IELTS Writing Task 1, (C14.T1) Q: The charts below  show what percentage of their daily intake of various nutrients the average person in the USA consumes in each meal and in snacks.  Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons.  The three pie charts compare what percentage an  average person gets nutrients in a ratio of different types in every meal and snacks in everyday life in the USA and it may be unhealthy if taken in excess. Overview, the largest amount of sodium and saturated fat are in dinner and the least in snacks. On the other hand, added sugar is the highest in snacks and the least in breakfast. To embark on, the consumption of sodium ais about 14% at breakfast and 29% at lunch is taken by the people of America. In addition, saturated fat intake by 16% and the same same quantity of sweetener is consumed in the morning meals. Besides, soluble fat diet is taken by people in lunch 26%and it reduced by 7%of sug...