Discuss both views

 Discuss both Views

Some people believe that climate has a great effect on people's way of life. Others think that the  economy of the region has the greatest effect. Discuss both views and give your opinion. (IELTS, January 2023, BRAZIL)

Key word Analysis (KWA)

1. People's way of life

2. Effects of climate on people's way of life

3. Effects of economy on the people's way of life

4. Which has the greatest effect

5. Discuss both

6. Your opinion.

Task Requirement

1. Why is  climate an important topic

2. How does climate affect the way of life of a people

3. What is the impact of economy in the life of people

4. What is more ( Your opinion)

General discussion.

1.  Why Climate is important

* Climate is a widely discussed topic because it is the most significant factor deciding the fate of humanity of an area.

* Any discussion on climate is more on the climatic changes and the resultant impact on the area rather than the conservative considerations of climate.

* It affects the way of life and the economy.

2. How does climate affect the way of life of the people

* Climate is a major factor that influences the way of life of the people of a region. 

* It affects the availability of the natural resources, such as water, food and energy as well as the health and culture of the people.

* In regions with hot and dry climate, such as the deserts, people have to adapt to scarce water resources and high temperature. They use irrigation, water conservation methods and solar energy to survive and thrive. They may wear light and loose clothing, eat less fat practise religions that emphasis fasting and prayers. They are physically and mentally sturdier.

* In the regions with wet and humid climates, such as the rainforests, people have to deal with abundant rainfall and humidity. They use rainwater harvesting, drainage systems and hydroelectric power to manage and utilize resource. They may wear breathable and waterproof clothes eat more fruits and vegetables and practise cultures that celebrate nature and diversity.

* Agriculture and food security: Climatic conditions determines the types of crops that can be grown, affecting food availability and local economies.

* Health: Extreme temperature, air quality, prevalence of diseases are impacted by climate affecting the health and well-being of the people of an area.

* Housing and infrastructure: The designs and materials of buildings of a region often reflect the climate aiming to keep the inhabitants safe and comfortable.  

* Economic activities: 

Different climates support different types of industries, such as tourism in warm climates or ice fishing in colder regions

* Migration patterns: Severe climate conditions can lead to displacement, as people move in search of more hospitable environments. 

 

3. How does economy affect the life of the people

The economy has a profound impact on the lifestyle of individuals and communities. It influences lifestyle through a combination of personal income, employment opportunities , cost and availabilities of goods and services. Here are some ways in which economic factors can influence lifestyle:

* Income and spending: Higher household income and spending power generally lead to a higher standard of living. 

* Employment: Employment status is a significant factor. Being employed , especially in a job that offers satisfaction can possibly affect one's lifestyle. Conversely, unemployment can lead to financial stress and reduced quality of life. 

* Housing market: The state of housing market influences lifestyle as it affects people's ability to own a house or afford the rent, which impacts financial security and living condition.

4.What is more affected? ( Your opinion)

* Both climate and economy significantly influence the lifestyle of people in an area, but the extent to which each affects lifestyle can vary on several factors.

* Ultimately, the relative impact of climate versus economy is context-dependent and can be influenced by the region's specific conditions. Both are intertwined and influence each other.

Structure of the essay

* Paragraph 1 Introduction

* Paraphrase the general statement

* Thesis sentence

Paragraph 2 BP 1

* Argument 1. How climate affects the people's way of life

* Explain (Reason/s for the argument

* Example for argument 1

* Conclusion of BP 1

Paragraph 3 BP2

* Argument 2. How the economy affects lifestyle

* Explain (Reason/s for the argument 2)

* Example for argument 2

* Conclusion of BP 2

 Paragraph 4 Conclusion

* Re-phrase the thesis including opinion 

Sample Answer

Paragraph 1 Introduction

It is often argued that among the factors that affect lifestyle of the people in an area,  the predominant one is  climate; however, the others deem that the economy has more impact on the the population. (paraphrase). This essay will dwell on both the views and validate my opinion that the extent to which each affect the lifestyle depend on multiple factors. Both are intertwined and influence each other. (Thesis sentence)

Glossary:

1. Argued: Held, believed, said, considered

2. Lifestyle: Way of life, customs and habits, mores.

3. People: Population, society, individuals

4. Predominate: Main, chief, prevailing, paramount,  notable.

5.Deem: Consider, regard as, judge, think, hold, argue.

6. Impact: Influence, effect, consequences,  ramifications.

7. Dwell on: Discuss, consider, elaborate on. 

8. Validate: Prove, confirm, substantiate 

9. Intertwined: Linked, interwoven, mixed, 

Paragraph 2 The impact of climate.

To embark on, climate is a major factor that influences the way of the people of a region because  it affects the availability of the natural resources, health and culture of them. (Argument 1) The lifestyle of the people in hot and dry climate is entirely different from that of the people in the wet and humid regions. (Reason) For example, while the people living in the tropical areas light and loose clothes and eat less meat, those in the rainforest regions wear breathable clothes and consume more fruits and vegetables. (Example) Thus, climate exerts no small influence in the lifestyle of the people. (Conclu. BP 1)

Glossary

1. Influence: Control, impact, affect, modify, direct, guide.  

2. Availability: Readiness, attainability, obtainability, readiness

3. Exert: Apply, employ, use, expend

Paragraph 3 Impact of economy

On the flip side,  economy has a profound effect on individuals and communities. It influences the lifestyle through a combination of personal income, employment opportunities and availability of goods and services. (Argument 2) Higher household income and spending power generally lead to a higher standard of living living. Conversely, unemployment creates financial stress and reduced quality of life. (Reason) For instance, the housing market, a prime example, impacts the financial security and living condition of the population. (Example). Therefore, the impact of economy on the can not be ignored. (Conclusion BP2)

Glossary

1. Profound: Deep, acute, extreme, abject, keen, great

2. Conversely: In contrast, on the contrary, on the other way around.

3.Ignored: Neglected, overlooked, disregarded, rebuffed.

Paragraph 4 Conclusion

To conclude, both climate and economy significantly influence the way people live in a region. Ultimately, the relative impact of them is context-dependent and they influence each other. (Re-phrased the introduction)

Glossary

1. Relative (adj): Considerable, comparative, reasonable

Other types of questions based on the General Statement:

1. Some people think that the climate has a great effect on people's way of life. How far do you agree or disagree?

2. Some people think that the climate has a great effect on people's way of life. How far do you agree? Are there any other factor/factors that affect the lifestyle of people?