IELTS ESSAYS 3. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS

 IELTS ESSAYS -3

DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS

Some companies sponsor sports to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Structure 


Paragraph 1 Introduction

a) Paraphrase general statement

b) Thesis sentence


Paragraph 2 Body Para 1

a) View 1

b) Explain view 1 (reason)

c) Example

d) Conclusion BP1


Paragraph 3. BP2

a)View 2

b) Explain (Reason)

c) Example

d) Conclusion BP2


Paragraph 4. Conclusion

a) Paraphrase

B) Thesis




Thanks to the exponential growth in the popularity of sports and games, manufacturers vie with one another to promote their brands by backing sporting events.  [Paraphrase] . While this practice has huge benefits, it does not lack some minimal drawbacks. This essay will dwell on both the perceptions and establish my opinion that despite the few minor negatives, patronizing sporting events is worthwhile. [Thesis]


To embark on, when companies come forward to sponsor mega sporting events, the organizers need not fret about funding. [View 1] Without sponsorship, several of the nations will not be able to send their teams to international events such as the Olympics. Moreover, sponsorship ensures the participants to earn an additional income which encourages numerous young people to take up sports as a career. [Reason] For instance, major events, such as the Football world Cup or the Olympic Games have myriad sponsors. [Example] Thus, sponsoring sports events is beneficial for the participants, nation and the sponsoring companies. [Conclusion]

On the flip side, when a vicious company associates with any major sporting events, it can tarnish the fame of the event and bring forth evils in the society, such as smoking and drinking. [view 2] For example, tobacco and liquor manufacturers sponsoring sports events can have negative consequences on the society. [Reason] Furthermore, unhealthy habits like match-fixing and doping are encouraged by the sponsorship money. [Example] Therefore, sponsorship of large companies can have detrimental effects also. [Conclusion BP2]

To conclude, companies' sponsoring is useful for both sports and the sponsors because the companies get brand awareness, and the sports get funding. [Paraphrase]. Even though there are a few negative, sponsorship seems to be inevitable. [Thesis]


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