IELTS Writing Task II. Model Answer- Advantages and Disadvantages.

 IELTS Writng Task II.  Advantages and Disadvantages. 

 Model Answer.


International tourism has enormous benefits, but at the same time, it has concerns for the local inhabitants and environment.
Do you think the advantages of international tourism outweigh its disadvantages?


Global tourism has witnessed a burgeoning growth, thanks to globalization, and it has become a vogue among people to explore different parts of the world. It is often argued that international tourism has myriad merits; however, many people believe that it is not conducive to natives and the locality. This essay will dwell on the advantages such as increased economic and infrastructural developments of the tourist destinations. At the same time, we ought not ignore the drawbacks that tourism about, including its adverse effects on local culture and pollution. In my opinion,  even though there are a few demerits, the merits of global tourism outweigh  its demerits.

To embark on, the proponents of international tourism plead that it bolsters the economic activities of the locality and cater to the development of infrastructure , including leisure, hospitality and aviation industry. The first and foremost, the tourist centres are frequented by international visitors, who stay and spend their money over there, and thus it brings prosperity to the host country. Moreover, global tourism creates a huge demand for local employers in the global market. A premier example is Switzerland, a country that is thriving entirely upon its tourists, who play a pivotal role in the economy of the country. Thus, without any doubt, international tourism escalates the development of host country.

On the flipside, international tourism is not without any demerits because it is detrimental to the native cultures and traditions. besides creating havoc on the environment. Obviously, the dominant alien cultures sit upon the native cultures and make them dysfunctional in the due course of time.  Above all, many of the tourist spots, which are glorified for their pristine beauty have become heaps of garbage beyond repair. The best example is the exorbitant rate of pollution faced by Sabarimala, which is reputed for its environmental beauty. Therefore, we may conclude that international tourism paves ways for the damage to the environment and culture of the natives.

To conclude,  although international tourism caters to the development of the tourist spots,  it harms the environment. This essay has discussed the positive and negatives of tourism and validated my opinion that despite a few minor demerits, the merits are more; therefore, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.



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