IELTS Writing Task 2. Agree/ Disagree.

 IELTS Writing Task II.

Type 1 Agree/Disagree

Model answer- Partially Agree.



You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:

Some people say that children should not be permitted to use the internet. 
How far do you agree or disagree with the statement?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant
 examples from your knowledge or examples from your 
own knowledge or experience. 
Write at least 250 words.


Among those gadgets, which revolutionized the modern life, nothing is so controversial as the internet because the general public are divided in their perspective of its use, especially by children. It is often argued that they ought not be allowed to use the net. However, in this essay, I partially agree with that notion and will establish my opinion that the internet is a mixture of both merits and demerits as far as children are concerned.

To embark on,  without any doubt, the internet is  a blessing for the young learners.  It is an unending source of information, which the students can pursue on a daily basis. Moreover, during the Corona 19 pandemic scenario, it is the internet that furnished total support to the student community to re-commence its studies. For instance, a recent study conducted by the UNICEF revealed the truth that the educational system of the country would have collapsed beyond repair if the internet had not been utilized to salvage it. Thus, the internet is an inevitable support to children. 

On the flipside, the net is not without any blemishes. No wonder, the irresistible attraction of it induces children to become addicted to it. Besides, the internet is infested with contents hazardous to children. A premier example is the research paper published by the Ministry of Education in India, which  shows that more than 80 percent of children are addicted to obscene materials cluttered on the internet. Therefore, exposure to the internet can be a potential danger to children.

To conclude, the common people are divided in their stance about allowing children to use the net. This essay has validated my opinion my opinion that I partially agree with the argument that children should not be permitted to use the internet because it is a tool that contains both vices and virtues. 





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