IELTS Writing Task 2 Agree /Disagree

 IELTS Writng Task 2

Agree/Disagree

Some people say that a big salary is more important than job satisfaction.
 How far do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answers and include relevant examples. 


Structure

Paragraph 1. Introduction.

* Paraphrase the general statement
* Thesis sentence

Paragraph 2. Body Paragraph 1

* Argument 1 - Why you agree or disagree.
* Reason why you agree or disagree.
* Relevant example
* Conclude Body paragraph 1

Paragraph 3. Body paragraph 2.

* Argument 2 - Why you agree or disagree
* Reason why you agree or disagree.
* Relevant  example.
* Conclude Paragraph 2

Paragraph 4. Conclusion

* Rewrite paraphrase
* Rewrite thesis sentence.


Answer: Totally Disagree

It is often argued that in order to lead a hassle-free life, people ought to have a high income even though the job satisfaction is meager. In this essay I totally disagree with that notion and validate my opinion that despite the huge salary, satisfaction in one's own work has myriad virtues.

To embark on, it is an undeniable fact that work environment gives people a sense of fulfillment that no money can provide. Even if one is earning an enormous salary, one cannot enjoy one's life in its fullest sense if the work environs is stressful. A premier example is the study conducted by the BBC among the healthcare workers  in the UK, which revealed that many doctors are shifting  to other professions because of high work-related stress, though they earn a fabulous salary. Thus, job satisfaction has an upper hand in a person's life.

Furthermore,  if a person opts  a career which suits his tastes and talents, it will provide him life's contentment in its fullest sense. It caters to the all round development of an individual. The best example is the former First Lady of the USA, Michelle Obama, who cast away her dollar-mincing career in a law firm, once she realized that her true calling is working with people and this rendered  her a sense of happiness and self esteem. Therefore, without any doubt, achievements in life is associated with  job satisfaction.

To conclude, it is a myth prevailing among a section of the demographics that  highly paid jobs are essential for life's triumph. However, this essay has established my opinion that I totally disagree with that  notion  because personal satisfaction is more rewarding than what money can buy.
                                                      ( Courtesy to Dr Radha Sasidhar). 








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